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English Essay 5: Preparing for an interview
The candidate should have minimum 2 (x>>y)(>>two)years working experience in electric or electronic industry, speak and write English fluently, be proficient in computer and other office equipment. He or She (C)(>>she )can (WC)(>>should)endure working (VT)(>>work)pressure and work with carefulness and patience. Strong communication and organization skills are preferred. Customer service background is better.
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear student, That was a nice passage you wrote preparing to interview a candidate to be your assistant, it was good. Well now lets take a look at the mistakes you have made. You need to work on your spelling and tense, I suggest you go through Englishtown grammar lab to help you with that, apart from that it was a good passage. Keep practicing, all the best.
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I studied in Sucheng First Middle School in my hometown for six years,(PU)(>>.)there (C)(>>There )are (VT)(>>were )six the (D)(>>)sports meetings in these years. I didn't go back home one evening during one (I(x))(>>of those )sports meeting(PL)(>>meetings). I didn't give my parents a phone (I(x))(>>call )a (x>>y)(>>or )message,(PU)(>>.) I took it for granted that they would understand it. After nine o'clock of (D)(>>)that night, they appeared in my school suddenly and looked like (D)(>>)very worried. They told me that they found (x>>y)(>>searched )everywhere and found me in the playground finally. I realized that I made a mistake,(PU)(>>.)this (C)(>>This )mistake made my mother and father worried without supper for several hours! I should have given them a phone a (x>>y)(>>call or )massage (SP)(>>message )that afternoon. So(x>>y)(>>Therefore), my dear friends, don't let your parents worry about your safety during exciting sports meeting!
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear student, Thank you for your submission. I enjoyed reading about this incident. You have done a good job. You introduced the topic, developed your ideas and concluded your piece well. However, have a look at the corrections I made and concentrate on: Verb tense: eg. ' there (C)(>>There )are (VT)(>>were )six the (D)(>>)sports meetings .....' . Spelling: eg. ' message ' . Word choice: eg. ' They told me that they found (x>>y)(>>searched )everywhere ....' .#p#分页标题#e#
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I am very glad to hear that you are going to have a party on this weekend. Salad is the best choice before (AR)(>>the )main courses(SI)(>>course). You can prepare different kinds of salad, such as vegetable, fruit, sausage, salted meat, or sardine. It's very simple, you just need to cut up (D)(>>)the vegetables, fruits or sausage fine, then mix them up, or put them in different bowls and ask the guests to mix them up by themselves. Prepare several kinds of jam,(PU)(>>;) different jams can give different tastes. How about my suggestion? Wish you have a good day.
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear student, Thank you for your submission. I enjoyed reading about the different kinds of salads. You have done a good job. Your writing is well structured and easy to read. I have read through and there are hardly any corrections that I need to make. You have obviously put in a lot of effort and edited your work before submitting it. Please work on: Number and articles: eg. ' ...the best choice before (AR)(>>the )main courses(SI)(>>course). ' . Try to read more English books, newspapers or magazines to help familiarise yourself with written English. I hope that my corrections and tips are useful to you and I look forward to your next writing. I am sure you will do very well in your next submission.
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I like dogs. Dog is loyaler than other animals. Dog can protect the house, play with the children and help the disabled. My family has a dog, it is very lovely. My mother treats it as a baby. She cooks food that the dog likes, baths it and goes out for a walk at dusk. This dog accompany my mother all day, so she doesn't feel lonely.
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear Student, You did a great job in describing your ideal pet, as it was clearly written and easily understood. You did well in keeping your writing simple and short. In your submission you have shown a very competent level in respect to this. Make sure you try and learn at least one new English word a day and you will progress very quickly. Good luck with future assignments. Happy writing.
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A merry Christmas and a happy New Year! New year is coming. Year of (D)(>>)2008 is (AR)(>>an) important year for China, it is very important for me also. My New Year's resolution is learning English, I hope that I can communicate with foreign friends freely after this course. How about your New Year's resolutions?#p#分页标题#e#
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The weather is going to be sunny before Wednesday. It is going to rain at the end of this week. The(D)(>>)high(C)(>>High)(MW)(>>temperature )this week is going to be 35 degrees, the(PH)(>>and) low (MW)(>>temperature )is going to be 23 degrees to 25degrees in rainy days. It is better to have a jacket in your baggage.
English Essay 6: Make a polite request
Would you mind speaking(PR)(>>on ) your phone in a low voice? Would you please turn the volume of the ring (MW)(>>tone )down? You won't miss any call (PL)(>>calls )even though the volume of (AR)(>>the )ring is lower(x>>y)(>>low ). Your friends can hear you more clearly if you speak in (AG)(>>a )lower(x>>y)(>>low ) voice. The environment of our office should be protected by everyone, is(x>>y)(>>is' nt ) it right?
Overall Teacher Comments
Hello student . Thank you for your interesting submission . Your writing was well organised and structured . I have read through and there are a few corrections you need to make : Preposition:Eg ."... speaking(PR)(>>on ) your phone ... . " ; Article:Eg ."...in (AG)(>>a )lower(x>>y)(>>low ) voice. " . Read a few good books in English and this will give you the practice you need to help you with new words . I hope my corrections and tips are useful to you . Keep working hard . You show great potential . Well done and good luck with your English studies . I look forward to your next writing.
