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这些Feedback能帮你写好英国毕业论文

时间:2018-11-12 17:04来源:www.ukthesis.org 作者:英国论文网 点击联系客服: 客服:Damien
作为一名英国留学生,写毕业论文遇到困难是很正常现象,但只要你努力克服,这个困难最多只是让你多话费一些时间罢了,最后仍然可以得到一篇优秀的毕业论文。下文是一名剑桥大学留学生分享的导师Feedback,每一条都针对毕业论文写作中常见问题,对提升自身写作水平帮助很大。快来看看吧。
1、目标和结果不清晰。
It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.
2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆ In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me
thods used in the study.
◆ Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments should be provided.
3、对于研究设计的rationale:
Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.
4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:
The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.
5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:
A hypothesis needs to be presented
6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念:
What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?
7、对研究问题的定义:
Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear, write one section to define the problem
8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literature review:
The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel.
9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification:
There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous work.
10、严谨度问题:
MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that.
11、格式(重视程度):
◆ In addition, the list of references is not in our style. It is close but not completely correct. I have attached a pdf file with “Instructions for Authors” which shows examples.
◆ Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and formatted. If you are unsure, please consult the formatting nstructions to authors that are given under the “Instructions and Forms” button in he upper right-hand corner of the screen.(责任编辑:quanlei_cai)


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